Sample Common app Essay: share your story

From the bustling streets of Mumbai to the serene landscapes of Kerala, India is a land of contrasts. As a Grade 12 student from this diverse nation, I’ve been fortunate to experience a tapestry of cultures, traditions, and stories that have shaped my identity. But amidst this vast array of experiences, it’s the rhythm of the tabla – a traditional Indian percussion instrument – that resonates most deeply with me.

Growing up in a middle-class family in Delhi, I was introduced to the tabla at the age of seven. My grandfather, a retired schoolteacher, believed that music was the soul’s language. Every evening, as the sun set and the city’s cacophony reached its peak, he would play his old vinyl records of classical Indian music. The beats of the tabla, intertwined with the melodies of the sitar, became the soundtrack of my childhood.

My initial tryst with the tabla was not out of passion, but rather a routine. However, as the years passed, the rhythmic beats began to echo the pulse of my heart. I realized that the tabla was not just an instrument; it was a bridge to my ancestors, a reflection of India’s rich history, and a testament to its resilience.

In school, while my peers were engrossed in Western pop and rock, I found solace in the intricate rhythms of the tabla. I began to take lessons, and soon, the once-monotonous practice sessions transformed into a passionate pursuit. The tabla became my refuge during challenging times, helping me navigate the pressures of academics and the complexities of adolescence.

But beyond personal solace, the tabla also became a medium for me to share my culture. I remember the exhilaration of performing at our school’s international day, where students showcased their diverse backgrounds. As my fingers danced on the tabla, I could see the intrigue in the eyes of my classmates. It was a moment of pride, not just for my talent but for representing a piece of India’s soul.

Applying to a top university in the US is not just about pursuing higher education for me; it’s about bridging two worlds. I believe that my background, rooted in the rhythms of the tabla, offers a unique perspective. Just as the tabla has diverse beats and rhythms, I hope to bring a blend of tradition and modernity, of East and West, to the campus.

In conclusion, while my academic achievements and extracurricular activities form a significant part of my application, it’s the rhythm of the tabla that completes my story. It’s a testament to my roots, my passion, and my desire to be a global ambassador for India’s rich cultural tapestry. I am not just an average Grade 12 student from India; I am a storyteller, with the tabla as my voice.

In our journey of discovery through the tabla with Ayush (Harvard Admit in 2022), we’ve come to realize the importance of authentic storytelling in the admissions process. As a career counselor, we’ve honed my skills in identifying and amplifying the unique voices of students, helping them weave their individual tales into compelling narratives. Every student has a story, a passion, or an experience that sets them apart. Our expertise lies in guiding you to find that distinctive voice, ensuring that your application not only meets the academic benchmarks but also resonates with the ethos of your dream institution. Together, we can craft a narrative that’s not just about grades and scores but about dreams, aspirations, and the indomitable spirit that defines you. Let’s embark on this journey together, turning your dreams into reality.

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